Endless Whispers Die Out Now

its over....
my tears have shed
my pain is exposed

within the beauty of this heartache

you've failed to rescue me

yet again...

your an ocean
the tidal waves drown my soul
misearbly and innocently

i am no longer yours

its over...
we're done
whats left is to erase our mark on
the tainted wooden chest
where we embedded our last
fairytale reminisce

your gone
yet i'm still living
my desire is never lacking

cut me lose

disfigure me

piece by piece
the distant disappears

tears curse my core
and finally..

melt me down

into your unforgiving body..

it's over

your my illusion

a ficitional being

i dare to ask of you one last time

touch my dying skin

and let the endless whispers die down

bury my tiring soul

forever now no longing more

its over

we're over

your gone..

reworked poem....after some editing and eliminating some words and adding

something to make it better than was before....what do you say???

poem i wrote thinking that it might spice things out....do you like it or are my words just blah...anywhooo it's over the nightmare is over......FINALS ARE FINETO...adios...they were so yesterday today i finished my last two and my best classes that i love history and english!... and come this wednesday our report cards are out and well my scores will be known...inshallah all goes well...downside we pick them up at 7:30 am why couldnt they make it in the afternoon..neeways..baby hello summer die down school.....in other news i went to jarir today and splurged on art supplies and such....this is my artful summer, college searching time and thinking facts straight, and reading the novels i havent read from jackie's collection ;)...each day should be productive and eventful....anywhoooo toodles for now...am guessing ill probably be posting more often now.....:) ah..beware i'll be a talking machine....:)