Obessed (Part 1)
She leaned forward to breathe the words to him, but he turned his face. Silently seeking the answers to her unknown questions, she smiled softly at his presence. She wasnt willing to admit the truth that unmasked his lies....she was blinded by the love she possessed for him. She closed her eyes and....
He took a step back, calculated his thoughts and put two and two together and he finally understood why she did that. Did he lead her to think he wanted her in that way? Was she really going to do this to herself? "Why decieve yourself and close your eyes? I've seen the fear you tried so hard to hid, and i sense those are wanting something they'd never get..." He looked back at her while she...
She took a step forward and touched his hand, he rescued his hands before she embraced them, when she slowly opened her eyes. Tears streamed down her face and she stood still no longer able to comprehend this any longer. She wanted this but it would never be.... because she couldn't understand the reality....unwanted.
"Could you if you were in her situation?"
The following was a short story by me, and i created those illustrations using paint and those were but a few from many to come which i am going to call my undiscovered Obession, that is doodles and writing..... :P hope you enjoyed it and any feedback is appreicated :P
posted by Your Battlefield at 3/15/2006 09:09:00 PM
5 Comments:
It's a great beginning really, and coming from an amateur writer I guess that's a great comment. Some spelling mistakes I caught was when you wrote "hid" when you meant to write "hide".
But great start ;r And those pictures remind me of you, because that is how you look like dimwit!
sugar your too sweet to me, ugh i really appreciate your opinion and i have written before but not for anyones eyes really, and what do you expect from me the dimwit, ofcourse grammar mistakes....:R
and sweetie, you need to open your eyes a little bit wider and notice something.....their nothing like me...or maybe they are and i haven't taken notice but again Merci :P LoveU
did anyone yet notice that there is something hidden in the second illustration if you concentrate and look at the sprayed black parts you'd figure out what it is....if you do..please tell me so and it's an added detail for the story below. :P thanks
I have no clue, I could not see a thing.
As for your writings, its ok, but am no expert.
ofcourse you have no clue, your always in that state.
its ok...then i guess u say that to everything if someone asked u how u feel after something horrible.
:P
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