Sullied Regrets Destroyed His Bliss
He broke out in a pool of sweat
His face glistened the prespiration mixed with salty tears
His finger nails revealed dry crimson blood embedded with injuries
The expression he bore - sullied regrets
As his victim lay crumbled on the cold ground taunted in search to avenge...
The tresses of her curly hair heigthened the beauty he scarred with his touch
He stole her innocence and marked her soul with stains
He drugged his core with desire from her battling end
Buried in his heart was the ardent need to hear her breathe
As he placed a parting kiss to her pale flesh
He whispered that destroying her with love was how forever is to last
A paramour's promise wiled reason for slaughter
Without charges reading murderer
-your battlefield-
I THINK I'VE BEEN WATCHING TOO MUCH PRIMETIME....SERIAL KILLERS AND SUCH! it seems to influence my poetry...
in other news:
Update: template changed ; I think this still keeps my obession with black and white entact; but forever blissful these colors assure a realm of my reality that I live in....I am thankful my cheers darling sis no4 has done all this magic...i watched in the process and she got attitudish on me she didnt even let me go anywhere just sit beside till she's done...it's worth the trouble ;)....she is mashallah talented ;*** to her!
cheers darling
posted by Your Battlefield at 8/03/2006 06:46:00 PM
10 Comments:
wow that was a really nice poem ( i wish i could right like that ) it seem like u hit the bulls eye u write and draw thats nice i only draw and i was thinking if u could post some of ut drawings online .i want to but ive been on vacation for 2 monts and i havent got the time but once i get back i will
P.S all i draw in is black
write* oops sorry
HOW SWEET.
sweetest sin:
*blushes from your dear remark*
yup me draws and i have posts in my blog that have my drawings; doodles and paintings...thought at this moment i am carefully reasoning whether to post up/scan others maybe i shall sometime this month...as for you i want to see your drawings and in black....oh black is a color i love; adore and cant live without i have no clue what i shall do when black ink is all gone and dried out ;p
chai-7aleeb:
is it as sweet as the sugar in your chai-7aleeb....heheh i'm trying to be funny prob sounded dorky anywhooo yup she's sweet and i'm spicy ;}
WHAT WOULD YOU SAY?
wow!!
first of all mabrook 3l new look
o tislam eed ur sisno4 :* matsalfeeni eyaha ;p
any ways i like the colors i like the white its better for my eyes anyway!
stop watching csi ;p
not good .. but i loved how descriptive it was in a vivid yet vague way! again very smart. full of taste.
i liked the part with his hands and nails ... really got to me .
i want MORE to :*
Honey, it's hot and all, however you need her to make the nicknames be bold, because you can't distinguish who said what and such. Or email me your info and I'll fix that and a few other things.
But otherwise great!
hey what type of pens do u use for the detailed doodels if u dont mind me asking
I'm lost!! I thought the old look was nice and suits u more... Anyway i'll get used to it ;)
Nice work here... As chai-7aleeb said: How sweet sis :)
filmgirl:
thanks...i'm speechless your words are making me smile and slighty blush...thanks...
yup me new layout is all from the hands of my genius little sis...and she's also the master behind jacqui my sister's header thingy...but i still need me jacqui to correct some things here and there concern comments and such...anywhooo i'll ask here and see what she says....get back to you soon....and if she did accept...you'd have to get a set of pictures u want; words you want etc....bas i'm no sure she is up for another template to create.
no3ik:
merci..thanks...it's like a extreme makeover from the past me...*grabs her young sis and locks her up in a closet*....what sis; i have no sis; who said anything about sis...
:P nooo i cant stop watching them...tonight i'm going to watch without a trace mainly cuz of the 3 hott guys in it ;p and with it learn so much related to crime...so if you need someone...to get someone...killed...i'll always be there ;p
jacqui:
why should i ruin your vacation in missouri with me other sister....yup ofcourse since you offered i'll give you me pass and login name...and you go on from there ;)
pretzels; pretzels; pretzels..
sweetest sin:
the normal ball point pens...at first in the phase of doodles i used ink but i got most of the ink on me hands than the paper so i switched to black ink and rarely use a diff color...mainly cuz black always color codes the creation in its way...:P..
sweets have you got an email so i can answer your questions any further and such dont hesitate...i love people who ask about what things i used; what i did etc...:)
me email is: yourbattlefield@hotmail.com
zizotime:
i dont like you
i dont like you
i dont like you
why should you be lost; explain how it was nice and why on earth it suited me....maybe cuz you started to get used to it...but long ago i was just a plain black template so you never saw that one...but anyone it's not always what you see is what you get ;)
yup she is sweet beneath her crude; nasty remarks to me while she did this...let's call it sisterly love in the unknown calls for it :)
you better get used to it ;)
filmgirl:
i asked me sister and she said "i'm busy"...i think when she finishes the project she's currently doing she can...but till then i shall keep you up to date when she accepts :)
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